Adjustments

After speaking to our teachers about the ending of the film, we have decided to re-film the end so we have a better reaction from Charli, instead of her just letting Luke grab her. This shouldnt be too difficult as we filmed this using artificial light and we havent moved the room since we last filmed so continuity shouldn't be a problem. We are going to add dialogue to this scene too as we think this will also make it look more realistic. We have decided that Charli doesnt know Luke and she doesnt have any idea why he's kidnapped her. We don't want it to be long but we want it to have a full dramatic effect on the audiences reaction, especially the build up to him holding her down. We have decided on

Charli: *terrified* Who, who are you?! (Pause) What do you want?!
Luke: *firm* Don't aggrivate me
Charli: *terrified* No, dont, dont touch me
Luke: *shouting* I said DONT AGGRIVATE ME (grabbing her violently)
Charli: *struggling* (screaming and whining when he covers her mouth)

Additionally as we are going to have the police interview before these scenes, we have decided to re-shoot the beginning of Luke where he is sitting in the office. We are going to have him reading the newspaper we made and then smirking and laughing at it and then he will chuck it down as if he doesnt care at all.wel will then continue with him hearing her banging and begin to walk up the stairs. We have devised a shot list:

1. Establishing shot of study
2. Point of view shot of newspaper
3. Close up of face - smirk
4. Point of view table - putting down newspaper
5. Close up of face- hold hears noise
6. Long shot, Luke gets up and walks out

We plan to film this on Saturday 24th March so we have time to edit it all and to hand in our final piece 31st March.